Student Voice
Beyond
Inside the walls, the world is grey
With boxes of clothes, dust, and clay
A single light escapes the day
And thro’ the window, sun does play
Past the window beyond.
Three beams of warmth shine through the blinds
And helpfully the outside chimes
A longing tune of hopeful times
So to the window, she does climb
Past the window beyond.
Beyond the window, is just green
With birds, and trees, and bugs, and breeze
A little bird begins to sing
Before another takes a-wing
Past the window beyond.
Golden branches sing a tune
With shapes of crimson, pink, and blue
Upon the leaves, lays joyous dew
With tiny feet among them too
Past the window beyond.
A trickle of gold forms a bird
Onto her hands she paints a verb
Walls obstruct her view of the world
But still, she finds a dancing whirl
Past the window, beyond.
She sees the day, she sees the night,
She only ever reaches wide
For green beyond the silenced light
So to the window, she does stride
To the window beyond.
Beyond the window, nature calls
A dampened tune of blue and gold
Outstretched, her fingers long to hold
The world beyond, and leave the cold
And pass the window beyond.
Tullia C
(Year 12, Advanced English)
This poem is a response for a writing task in Year 12 Advanced English that required students to reflect on "The View From My Window". The poem imitates the style and structure of Tennyson’s famous "The Lady of Shallot".
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